A beautiful, blue sky day.
A few clouds smiled,
Nodding as they floated away.
The waves fell onto the shore.
Glissing notes in harmony,
Hooked on the feeling, wanting more.
She looked up at me and said…
Be my lazy Sunday afternoon.
Cool your troubled mind,
Surrender willingly.
Everything’s here you’ll find,
Hold me closely.
I heard her whisper…
Be my late night lullaby.
Starry skies overhead,
We’re inside the fantasy,
Twinkling above my bed,
Kiss me slowly.
Be my early morning sunrise.
Dive into my addiction,
Caress me gently.
Floating away on the emotion,
Fall in love with me.
She asked while humming a soft melody
Sipping on the horizon, she placed her hand on mine. Turning her head to the side, she said…
…Be my midday surprise.
Kissing you just so,
You’ve never felt this magic.
Bewitch your soul,
Never been touched like this.
Be my fragrant,
Rose petal shower,
Kiss me slowly,
Late grows the hour,
Caress me gently.
Be my everything.
Yet linger,
Hold me closely.
Stay with me forever,
Be my eternity.
Fall deeply in love with me.
Yeah,
Thatβs what she saidβ¦
Carried away on the melody from a seashell,
Caught just right by the breeze,
Counting petals on flowers,
While we looked out at the ocean.
by malakhai jonezs
(c)copyright 2016
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Beautiful beyond words. π
Thank you Zen! π
The love, the LOVE! Beautiful word melody my friend. <3
Thanks Elizabeth! I appreciate your kind words. <3
Be my late night lullaby.– I love this whole poem, and especially what that line evokes. Gorgeous.
Thanks Victory! π This means a lot coming from you. The way you wordsmith sensual lines is something for me to aspire, to not imitate, but to master with regard to evoking emotional responses.
Wow, thanks so much! You made my day! π
But honestly, you do this extremely well. Your words have a beautiful flow to them. You create a mood and follow it through the whole piece so well.
π Grinning.
π good!
Lovely! I loved it. β€
Thank You Shreya! π
Wow! This is beautiful! Do check out my works too if you’re interested.
Thanks Faristha! I’ll check you out.
“She” is quite the poet! You are a lucky man :-). Beautiful lyricism, thank you for sharing.
Or maybe “s/he” has quite the imagination. :). Thanks for reading it and giving me feedback. It is most appreciated.
You make stunning writing look second nature my friend!
Thank you Candice! That means a lot as I am in awe of your work. I look for it. Let’s leave it right there to express my sentiments about your talent and skill.
This poem is beautiful!
Thank you, Deb!
Great post
Amazing
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Thank you!
So beautifully expressed! Wonderful poem..
Thank you so much! I appreciate your time given to my poem and your feedback. π
Amazing…..no words to appreciate your writing skills…….beautifully written and expressed….seriously loved reading it………..ππ
Thank you so very much! I appreciate your giving my poem your time and to also give me feedback on it. Thanks again! π
My pleasure……..keep smiling……ππ
Amazing poem and beautifully expressed. π
Thank you very much! π I appreciate you sharing your feedback with me and giving my poem your time.
Not what I expected by the title! I enjoyed the scenery.
Thanks for the read Kelley!