I don’t know you. What you look like is a curiosity, but immaterial to the space you occupy in my mind. When we connect via written word and self expression, I now, know something of the most intimate nature about you. An image of you. A beautiful rose or a dark secret that’s a part of you. Your dreams. Your hopes. Your shortcomings. Your frailties. All released to the heavens when you release that kite. A human being having a very human experience.
I don’t know you, know you, but I do know some hidden thoughts that you’ve shared through your pen name. Many of these freed thoughts striking a chord within me. The ones that catch me the most are posts that begin with, “I don’t know if anyone will read this or if you stumble across this…” Nothing but a truly genuine emotion metaphorically penned to paper; scribbled on the wall. Written on the wall to let those who pass by know that you too were here. An emotional, thoughtful, careless, reckless, moody, imaginative, sensual, needy, dependent, virtuous, ethical, and playful human being like all human beings. I see the light in the words and I reach out a hand simply to say, “I see you.” I see your light.
Lights that are set off like fireworks in the night sky. Fireworks streaming dendrites connecting and forming new memories and shared ideals and ideas with no regard to race, gender, sexual orientation, age, etc. Just a million voices all speaking to simply be heard – be heard in a world of increasing dissolution – a world giving way to the simulacra.. While at the level of one plus one equaling two – another human being understanding or being exposed to another human being’s rather human sentiment – finding a voice and ear and body within the simulation.
In the land of the blind, all thoughts and emotions are created equal. In a sense we’ve already arrived at technological transcendence with each mind reaching out to one another in a world built on top of the world.
I see you. I hear you.
By malakhai jones
(C) copyright 2016
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Beautifully expressed!
Thanks Victory! I appreciate the comment.
Poetic and deep, I like how wordpress provides that opportunity, where people are judged on the words, much less on appearance, past history etc.
Thanks Fionn! WordPress is a good break for me to just be me, even though I use a pen name. Thanks again!
I love this. We truly are in the land of the blind and get to know each other deeply. Beautiful piece.
Thanks Deb! I appreciate the feedback and commentary!
I really do think it’s beautiful how true and honest your feelings towards this person can be because you can have no opinion of her besides her rawest emotions. A really sweet piece.
Thanks Natasha. I like how it looks through your lens. π
Through our words, we acknowledge our true selves. Every story we share, every poem we write, we reveal a tiny piece of our soul. Some pick up on that, some don’t. I think it takes a person who loves the written word to see beneath the surface…read between the lines.
Writers just “know”.
An insightful post, M, and beautifully offered up.
Thank you as always for applying your skillful to my work, Cathy!
You’re welcome, M. π
After I read, “I see the light in the words and I reach out a hand simply to say, βI see you.β I see your light.”
Then I melted. Loved this piece. Very organic & Honest.
Thank you Alia. Can’t help but be honest back when a lot of people’s posts are heartfelt expressions themselves. Hopefully, I’m just reflecting that light. Thanks again for the feedback.
It’s a beautiful thing when you can bare it all and be honest. You’re Welcome!
I agree with you!
This is nice MJ this poet must be really good
Thanks WLP! π
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Sometimes I’m embarrassed at how I crave attention in my writing. But then after some meditation I am comforted by the fact that we are all that way, and all one on the same fabric of life. Or all brain synapses waiting to be caught. It’s really beautiful when you look at it like that; like perfect harmony between the masculine and the feminine forces.
Wow! Trinity you have an excellent way of expressing yourself. Thank you! And my apologies for getting lazy with your pen name. I’m assuming it stands for the “good news about the holy trinity.” Hence me shortening things and simply calling you Trinity. I guess I could’ve gone with GI which would’ve been even shorter. π
Pretty much. But I like the sound of ‘Gospel Isosceles’. You know, as opposed to ‘Good News Equilateral.’ Or you could always call me Amaya π
I will address you as Amaya! Beautiful name! π
Awesome insights into the cosmic world of the blogosphere. Thank you for this, it resonates very heavily with me today π
You are most welcome Christine. Thank you for sharing your sentiments with me. π