Seashells in Your Pockets
Sounds of the Ocean
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I put a seashell to my ear and it all comes back
The ocean waves were falling in on themselves against the shore. Racing – rushing into pathways – swirling inside dug outs – the water was frothy, gritty, and brown. The sound, rice krispy, beneath the sand as the water receded. The rhythm oscillated back and forth against the porcelain of the shell. There behind it, the brass blew a nasty hook, looping and building, but never letting him go. He leaned into the notes; leaned into the hypnosis. The bars flooded over him, pouring images of the Hypnotic, Exotic, Brown, of her, into any available opening – eyes, ears, nose, and mouth.
It was a day exactly like today. He topped the hill, shifting gears before a grand march of street lights lining the blacktop like paparazzi. Catching the light, the starburst traced a path from the front of the bike to the back. Waiting at the top of the hill, with wheels turned outward, a patrol car perched on its haunches. Shit! Kick it down. He told himself as he hurried to drop his speed, ever keeping watch on the patrol car from the corners of his eyes.
Reaching the bottom of the hill, he turned and spotted her. She was turning through the intersection. The top of the car was dropped. The wind caught her hair, holding it. It’s fingers running through it, while she sang. Brown eyes. Dark brown hair. He thought to himself, There’s something to be said for a woman singing love songs with the drop-top down. Smiling like Springtime, not caring if anyone else is around. Sultry and sexy, she commanded the machine with authority as it disappeared into a parking garage.
Oh well, another time, another place.
by malakhai jones
(c) Copyright 2016
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Lovely. I can feel the whole scene…well done.
Thanks Elizabeth!
I like how this goes from the ocean to the city and the girl in the car. You built the scene so well.
Thanks Victory! The whole thing is in 5 parts. I didn’t think most ppl would have the patience to read all 5 together as they were written. I still tried to write each part so ppl wouldnt have to read the others, to hopefully, enjoy each one.
Oh really? How do I get to the other parts?
Hold one second to binge read. 🙂
cool, I’m going to read it as soon as I can. 🙂
Cool. No rush. I’ll be releasing the remaining parts over the weekend, if you change your mind.
You really could feel and hear your words..so very descriptive. ( rice krispy exactly what sand sounds like! Perfection) look forward to reading more
Thanks for reading these words UpChuckingwords and to respond with commentary. It’s greatly appreciated!